Doctor Kitty

I don't particulary like the punctuation of the first line. It doesn't seem to fit. However, I do like the 'dark to light' theme, and the rhyming doesn't feel forced ...

I could imitate your laugh or hers you like hers so dearly I could do that if I tried - This line confuses me. I've said it out loud a ...

You already know what I think of it... I think it's clever. I'm definitely not skilled enough in the poetry area to give you any useful advice, though. I personally ...

Ooh. Mysterious! :O I liked it. Pretty original. Pretty decent "reader catcher" past the first few sentences. I'm curious as to why what happened happened. Write more. :P =============================

Ah, gunslinger tales. Gotta love 'em. Nice work! Random and out of the ordinary; I like it. I don't see too much to critique other than what has already been ...

Pretty creepy. Very intense. I liked it. First, I noticed a few places where a semicolon would work a lot better than comma. i.e. Of course Beck took in Elmo ...

Mmm...Gotta love craziness. I actually write crazy things like this when I'm bored... A piece like this can't be easily far as I can go is saying that "LOLWTF DATS ...

I need to critique more often. I accidently clicked on this and the words jumped off the page and grabbed me by the eyeballs. (Ow.) I can't relate to the ...

Like, we expressed the fancying, like who fancies who and that. So you kindo of notice who likes who! XD So you're saying that you'd like to have a threesome ...

This poem is completely based on Invader Zim. :P Bacon Soap is from one of the episodes of Invader Zim. I.e, "WHY IS THERE BACON IN THE SOAP?" "I MADE ...

oh, this is based on real life, everyone in the play is actually real people we know. .................................................... :shock: Please tell me this is innuendo and not some...sick p

Very clever! It's a little hard to sing though (lots of syllables). But other than that, JOY! 9/10! :wink: Unfortunately for Bobo he's received a lot more than 7 avatar ...

My Theology mid-term/final/whatever is going to kill me. Just so much stuff to...*shudder*...memorize. As for finals, i.e. the tests right before summer, if I keep my averages above 93, then ...

Their once was a Bard by the name of Godferry Harper, he was no strong person, he knew no magic, yet he was wanted throughout the land for his gift ...

I love LD's. They're fun to study and REALLY fun to have. I've only had one. It was years ago, and I forget what it was about, but I know ...